Comments of chapter undefined of A Slave To My Vengeful Lover

ha??your sister just died and she is her bff and in this situation your arouse🤔😶😶😶

Mark started to get feeling for Anna?? this is really unexpected...

not sure how I'm feeling about this story.. everything is moving to fast and a lil repetitive.

Poor grammer

more than half of this chapter is repeating the previous chapter, why? anyway, nice write up

😶😶😶 how old is Anna???😶😶😶 Honestly, I have no words for this story........

Wow i cant even read this due to the literacy. Great story very poor grammar.

Needs to work on your English...

That’s really a fascinating love story that i like.

Nice story Author are you still a high school student?? Jct curios

I Cant wait till they get together

Dude, if you want to pass out your revenge, then do and make it faster. Don't let beauty with brains to deceive you oo

one thing I don't understand is why web novel had to put some locks on it .I mean why its too straight forward 😫

the feeling I am getting from this novel is stupid beginning from marks point of view its so so disheartening. I mean I was enjoining it from the starting oo but when it got to I don't want to see her hurt ,hopes got crashed .it ruined my mood completely .the English now spoilt it all

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As with what alot of the readers have said here, the grammar does deter one from enjoying the novel. It is interesting seeing that most of the works I found here have great grammar. Perhaps author can engage someone to do proofreading and editing of this story to help author better express herself since it is obvious that English is not her first language. Some expressions are unclear that I find myself skipping through them.

exciting and interesting stories ☺️

interesting stories ☺️

?,I just don't know

Dear Author I have just starded the book and ot seams to br interesting but the grammer and translatio is really bad. Makes it hard to read you might Want to look For a better translation software.