RileyPetesGeralt
Can you go back and change how Riley got the virtuso skill to him copying done the book into a notebook or something and then using the copy to get the skill. Makes Riley seem like an a-hole to destroy a book that got Alex through rough times without a second thought.
Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :) Wow! so Alex's squad suspect that Riley may be Alex's illegitimate son or something like that. Very interesting theory, perhaps that theory will seem more likely to them after seeing how close they are and that Alex has kind of taken him under his wing, like a father-figure. However that all depends on how things play out. It wasn't really made clear what Alex's plan was, and what he expects Riley to do, besides fighting when needed, because, unlike in previous times, Alex and Riley shown up together in front of Alex's squad. So this may be a little different than before.
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