Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

This works out well. I was concerned that Grenlet would go to the Balen household while Quinn went to the 3rd castle. Now when he goes there, he will see that his family is there and will be in a rage... especially if they are being treated poorly.

super excited to see where this is headed. will Quinn remain calm seeing his family. or will he lose his cool? will Layla go into labor when Quinn flips out and that will be what calms him....ahhhhh need more chapters.

I feel like Layla is about to go into labor at any moment.

The cliff it hurtsss!!!!!

I feel like Quinn wouldn’t like seeing his family going to the third castle he may have a misunderstanding and get more mad

Quinn: I told u to bring the offender and you went and grabbed my family, clap for yourself, here goes a cookie, you know what else you earned a quick death for being a smart ahh.

2 thoughts, first ever since Quinn used his shadow eater on those people I've felt that quinns shadow eater needs a new benefit, it can't increase his mc cells any more but could it mske his shadow more strong/thick making it easier for him to create solid shadows or maybe increases the range at which Quinn has full control and can create things with the shadow. second if grenlet was do offended at Edvard asking to see one of his subjects for punishment, how much of an insult is grenlet forcing one of Edward's subjects to appear before him without talking to Edvard first? I think if Quinn is held back from doing anything by the threat of grenlet doing something to layla/the new baby/minny then Edvard should doing something, maybe with the help of the other leaders, for the disrespect that grenlet has shown to another original and their family.

Love seeing Layla act more mature and give advice to Tobi from the experience with her own mother. Really shows she's grown up and will be great mother. As for Tobi and Minny I don't mind it but don't think she anyone will be able to get her to fall for them. Like Minny is so exceptional that it would be hard to make enough of an impression on her. Now I don't mind if the ship happens when the grow up after all it gives time for Tobi to earn her forgiveness and be a true friend for her. I have the feeling Tobi will end up doing something making an impression on Minny like protecting her or Layla even though they don't need it at the cost of himself getting forgiveness. Really thought the third leader would go to the house but after seeing the escorts I realized how out of place it would be for him to do that. But boy once Quinn see his family he is either going to lose it though the third leader may save himself if intends to ask what they want done with Tobi's family. Depends on what his intentions are with calling them besides his interest due to Edvard.

Feels like day by day length of the chapters are shrinking ......... need more 🥺

Layla when she sees Quinns negative emotions

Things are about to go sideways for the Third family very soon.

well the third leader just screwed himself. should have gave the culprits up

That’s gonna turn out great, take Quinns family to the 3 rd castle without him there. This dudes place is gonna be burned to the ground

OK I got to admit that Layla mediating between Tobi and Minny was probably the best outcome, especially with everything she went through with her own mum back in the day, but the fact that Grenlet's people have turned up to summon them to the 3rd castle could help the situation depending on how Grenlet treats them, because with Quinn on his way to there, it could go both ways.

In 3th castle: Quinn was sitting on throne… But it wasn’t throne exactly, but Grenlet was seat and Earl was back of throne. On his right was Edward trying not to smile. “So, that boy’s mother is responsible for everything?” Quinn asked, petting head of 3th leader. “Daddy!” Minny shouted and next moment was on his knees hugging him “What? I couldn’t see her running. She just teleported!” Edward thought. at the same time there was sound of door starting to open and Layla with Tobi coming in

trying to escort quinn's family is a big mistake well I think it's time for the cover to be blown they wanna mess with his family for the second time I'm pretty sure quinn won't accept that

Ahh

The only saving chance for Grenlet is for Quinn to arrive first and Grenlet tells Quinn that he asked for his family to be brought thete for him to learn the truth. Or Quin comes in like he did Edvard's throne room the first time and ot ends up with the 2 fighting just as Layla and Minnie arrive and she sucks all of the negative emotion out of the room to deescalate things so they can talk.