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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Prithvi_Sankar
Prithvi_SankarLv15Prithvi_Sankar

I love the novel but i feel the pace at which the story is progressing now is a bit slow .

Sandman2288
Sandman2288Lv14Sandman2288

Man JKS I was only joking when I said something a couple chapters ago about wanting to read 5 chapters for Christmas. But I gotta say phenomenal chapters just cant get enough. There is so much for everyone to showcase power wise, you do a great job of showing it all.

DarkShadowBlaze
DarkShadowBlazeLv15DarkShadowBlaze

Nice was hoping that Layla would show up to help instead of Quinn. No offense we had plenty of father daughter moment but want more mother daughter moments now. Plus Layla rarely gets to show off despite being one of the strongest characters. Wonder if she will give Minny the ok and of the students will be let in on their secret. Can you imagine their shock at finding out Minny is a princess and that all the achievements of Jim belong to her father.

NRWriting0289
NRWriting0289Lv14NRWriting0289

Hahaha, Behold, the Power of the Balen Family!!!!

craig_tucker
craig_tuckerLv15craig_tucker

Christmas miracles do exist

Kaifchocho
KaifchochoLv14Kaifchocho

the whole family and their powers boutta be exposed

Sandman2288
Sandman2288Lv14Sandman2288

Man just read the last chapter again, the true king and family will be coming home and taking claim.

Ryan_Arthurs
Ryan_ArthursLv14Ryan_Arthurs

loving it man and 5 chapters? much appreciated man. appreciate the escape you give everyone in your books. thank you

keith_collier
keith_collierLv15keith_collier

on another note... these chapters were greatly appreciated by all... I for one will understand if a few days go by with no chapters... you deserve to enjoy Christmas as well... Merry Christmas JKS... take some family time and get back to work once the new year begins

Tom_McCurdy
Tom_McCurdyLv15Tom_McCurdy

Minny had this I under control , now Mom is going to tag team killing all Beasts hahaha

TERRY_WILLIAMS
TERRY_WILLIAMSLv15TERRY_WILLIAMS

🤔 Is it me, or did these Chapters seem extremely short!🤷🏾‍♂️

Rimiru_Tempest_517
Rimiru_Tempest_517Lv14Rimiru_Tempest_517

Thank you for the chapters! I was so excited! Loved them!

ElPrincipeAustral
ElPrincipeAustralLv14ElPrincipeAustral

So finally Layla arrives and starts showing her powers!!! Killing tens of beasts with a single draw of her strings and her Spiritual Chains!

Kenneth_Marvig_2182
Kenneth_Marvig_2182Lv15Kenneth_Marvig_2182

Not to be greedy but can we have 5 chapters of Quinn beating up those monsters manana?

Michael_Yankey
Michael_YankeyLv12Michael_Yankey

How can I get to read another chapter now? I'm willing to pay any price

Koco1
Koco1Lv14Koco1

best Xmas present yet 🥳

DaoistiVON0F
DaoistiVON0FLv15DaoistiVON0F

Excellent chapters!! Very exciting and showing of Minnys strength against the beasts as well as a showing of Laylas power.

Koco1
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OneEyedOwl96
OneEyedOwl96Lv15OneEyedOwl96

my power is out and it's in the negatives outside but it's okay because I'm cuddled up and got read a bunch of chapters at once 😊 thanks for keeping me distracted on this freezing winter night!!

Nerdd_01101111
Nerdd_01101111Lv12Nerdd_01101111

if the beast could sense Quinns presence then definitely celestials could also do like they found out about H of marpo cruise if thats the case then even celestials are afraid of him plus talons are strange what if when the baby is born bliss takes them away or something drastic happens so that Quinn will not be able to see his kids. but yeah i want them to be trained by Quinn protected by Minny and layla and become a happy family

Jessie_McCuller
Jessie_McCullerLv14Jessie_McCuller

JKS your on a ball keep those chapters coming