Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Good job Erlen!! Humility, he learned it! I honestly kinda hope he joins the Cursed Faction now.

Quinns gonna keep piling up the feats and impressing everyone whos willing to watch and when its revealed that hes the leader of the cursed faction everyones gonna want to join!

OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING I loved seeing Quinn forgive him... maybe Erlen will join the Cursed he'll be a great asset

Good for Erlen. He learned his lesson. Also, Quinn... try to remember what humans are capable of

The good part about Quinn is that while he is strong if not stronger then the ones in charge he will still forgive those who did wrong as long as they truly learned their lesson. While others who abused their power would just use it to keep making the other side suffer.

It's great to see Erlen learning from his mistakes and understanding that what he did was wrong, but was still willing to try and help his parents by forfeiting the fight and asking for their jobs back in front of everyone.

rip, I would have loved if them fought anyway, the thought was enough

well the tough part here may be dealing with his parents again but it should work out... I am just excited to see the rest of the fights and then what happens between hardy and the erathborn generals.

we have a new recruit

Since no one has called it..... First!

Anyone else see the somilarities betWeen erlen and Erin lol the name the ability the sword the attitude as well as the attitude change lol

Welcome to the Cursed faction Erlen.

Thanks for the chapter JKS ❤❤

Quinn be makin waves

Erlen made his move at the big event in hopes to restore his family’s livelihood and legacy. I hope Quinn talks to him and gives him (and his family) a second chance.

I just want to cry! I think that was the most beautiful exchange of a heart felt apology I have ever read, or seen! Lesson completely learned!😢😢😢❤❤❤❤👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Humility is a wonderful thing Erle…also, Quinn, youre not supposed to have super hearing bud….Quit showing them everything ya got lol

Yesss redemption for Erlen, this pleases me. It was a great chapter, hope the kid ends up joining the cursed faction.