Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

I am starting to like Helen a bit more than Layla

I love Helen lol and I like that other female general.. she doesn't seem stuck up and she had enough sense to realize what was happening.. now.. let's talk about Quinn... Helen has seen him use the shadow.. his blood aura.. his super speed.. his super strength.. and now his "charm" ... who wants to bet by the end of this ark she comes into the secret side of the cursed family

Thirsty much, Helen?

only down side to Helen is if her and Quinn do get together I have no idea how Layla will possible get over it, I mean the girl straight up refused to talk to my main man Quinn just because Helen asked him out infront of people. like really?!? Quinn deserves someone who isn't afraid to be upfront with him, but what scares me about Helen is Quinn needs someone who will ground him when he goes dark side like that not someone who is like 'oo sexy how dark can you go ;)'

Helen's ovaries are about to jump out and attack Quinn and I 100% Support her. Tired of the innocent and slow teenaged love with Layla. THROW ME SOME HOT PASSIONATE ELOPEMENT!!!

To helen lol

ooo a double dose today! perfect, I was needing a MVS fix lol, don't do drugs kids. just read books. They are practically the same thing. Looking forward to Quinn infultrating the whole school system and rewriting its rules! Along with putting a few in their places.

I want to see more of this right here!

Quinn reacting to the generals.

it's obvious Oscar hasn't or can't clean his own House. Military leadership is about more then just raw power and a effective chain of command. Soldiers are not barely contained psychopaths with purpose. it's starting to look like there were a lot of Duke like generals in Oscar's military. Oscar really needed to clean those problem people up, because Harry and Peter will straight up kill them.

layla needs to step up before Helen steals her man

I like this Quinn. he has the power to be at the top of all worlds, and those that abuse similar strength to bully the weak will be bullied themseleves

Epic chapter!!

Quinn sure knows how to make an impression

Well I can definately see Helen making some excuse to get close to Quinn while they are at the new Military Base/School, and maybe Quinn will humor her for a bit, but we all k ow that he'll never betray Layla. I wonder how long it will be though before Quinn end up taking out some of the other Head Generals, for now treating people right. Could this also be the return of the Night Demon as a way of punishment

And so, the shakedown has begon

Thanks for the chapters JKS ❤❤

really like Helen as a love interest for quinn really want layla to e his partner but she a little to soft maybe the time apart will make her bolder

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I didn't understand why part one was named as it was, but part 2 made it all make sense! Excellent chapters!