Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Peter, slowly increasing the 10ths influence without meaning too lol. I feel like that happens with him often due to his personality, the side effects of his actions just kinda spread. Also it's nice to see some actual male friendships that aren't either: 'A handshake is as close as we get' or taken as romantic. which both have their merits and can be written well. But just solid 'I got your back you can depend on me' friendships are a nice thing I find in this book. (Fex and Quinn, Peter and Logan, Vorden/Raten/ and Sil, etc)

im happy to see Logan ok.. but u can't just show us all the leaders about to fight then switch to a running chapter xD lol its torturist lol welp.. Peter a true bro

wow Logan just can't catch a break! so close though :/

Peter went from mildly crazy Quinn servant to awesome Hero alongside Logan. now he has to pull off another miracle and save Logan. Now that Logan is hurt and surounded by vampires Peter is literally his only lifeline.

my boy peter showing he doesnt need the title of knight to be a knight. I'd say hes like a black knight of the group. xD he dont playyyyyy

Good boy peter

Peter and Logan are tight — best buds. 🥰 And Peter is making a good name for himself while coming to the rescue.

YOU SHALL NOT PASS!!!

oh and great story!! wonderful job keeping up with your schedule jks!!! 2 more chapters for Tuesday and 24 more hours to write them (atleast where I am)

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Poor guys ... now the 8th Family not the only enemy ..

Oh! There he is ☺️

Peter is raising the point on quinns system ....... iF the king dies does quinn have enough of a following to become king himself?

So many unfortunate events!

Wow.

hmm...🤔🤔🤔

só now peter os going to play king of the Hill!! He will bê the last one standing... that's nice he will punch his bromance on every vampire he see!

I love Peter, I wish he had more action he was involved in.