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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Ryan_Gilpatrick
Ryan_GilpatrickLv14Ryan_Gilpatrick

Borden is a BEAST, his attack made an original question if he could take it full on, impressive. Where's Leo and Silver, the tenth need some back up. I really hope Alex doesn't die, and I hope Erin goes crazy and throws Cindy a beating. can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing JKS.

hardshot290
hardshot290Lv15hardshot290

Didn’t like the ending of that chapter.

Shmoople
ShmoopleLv12Shmoople

so what happened to leo silver fex and nate..

Munchy18
Munchy18Lv13Munchy18

Yay more problems for quinn before he can solve his current twenty 😭

KJ_Hebert
KJ_HebertLv14KJ_Hebert

Im just glad Borden isnt dead

Skydog_Rules
Skydog_RulesLv14Skydog_Rules

after all that struggling just give up now is incredibly self-centered

terr_t
terr_tLv14terr_t

So little at such a slow rate while simultaneously providing so few details, repetitive information and no end of storylines..... Great story, but definitely more frustrating dealing with this book than driving on roads in Iraq! :) Glad I have other go to books. Once my credits run out, I’m taking 6 months or so off. May not return though unfortunately. All we do is spend money and it takes months before you even know what’s going on. Some of us have lives and would rather spend our hard earned money on something other than anticipation. You would think that a mass dump of 15 Chapters or so once a month would or so would explain the pace of this book. Well written, but its like paying for a loaf of bread and only getting a slice. Its good, but just not the quantity you paid for.

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

We wre facing yet another shofting narrative and new villain when the threads are still all completely unpulled on the rest from this arc.

terr_t
terr_tLv14terr_t

I’m not worried about Alex at all. His biggest problem is, that he’s never practiced with his powers before. It’s just a matter of time before he realizes that Vampires have more to fear from him than he does from them. I’m counting on Alex waking up to the fact that he’s a basically a kid in a candy store!

Kevin_Gilchrist
Kevin_GilchristLv13Kevin_Gilchrist

That was one of the weakest chapters so far

LokiXavier
LokiXavierLv15LokiXavier

Another kidnapped arc. As much as I like Alex as a character I would’ve rather he died then have another plot line just haning out there and another kidnapped/captured/taken arc.

Munchy18
Munchy18Lv13Munchy18

Alex: i wonder why they are all after me i must be dangerous.. Also alex: nah that cant be it (refuses to awaken or use his vampIre killing powers but hey i can fly)

CyberKamikaze
CyberKamikazeLv15CyberKamikaze

Can Quinn get as strong as an original?

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

If there isnt resolution to at least SOME of these plot points soon, might be time to find another book.

Dan_Walker
Dan_WalkerLv15Dan_Walker

I hope he goes in drinks his Original bloid and then shadow eats the 8th. Alex has power too, wish he would use some if it

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

Yeeep, my priv runs out Monday. I Have no plans on renewing it. I will wait till he finishes or at least gets a good Head start. This is getting painful to read and even more so at this glacial pace.

KJ_jumper
KJ_jumperLv14KJ_jumper

Ugh poor Alex. He never asked for any of this, I feel so bad for him since he has no other options but to either rely on his friends, or give himself up. I dont thibj this is the last we will see of him though. Hopefully Leo and the others are still ok, they do have the boneclaw with them afterall.

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

💩💩💩

LadyMirfain
LadyMirfainLv13LadyMirfain

my question 8s who kidnapped who? did remus kidnap alex or did alex kidnap remus? I need to know the answer to this and soon.

TheCure
TheCureLv15TheCure

Perfect, so Alex will reunite with Silver, Leo, Fex and Nate. Erin & Layla just need to make her way out (to ‘rescue’ Quinn) then the 10th would be sort of okay. Quinn should then find a way shadow travel and sing Kumbaya (here we come)

KJ_Hebert
KJ_HebertLv14KJ_Hebert

Was Remus so fast no one saw him run into the castle or did he get in another way?