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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Muttley
MuttleyLv15Muttley

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Jonathan_Viau
Jonathan_ViauLv14Jonathan_Viau

sooo many excuses, its like a running gag now every time we have no chapter the author give an excuse for not giving us chapter or to give im reason to give less.i know you have other thing to do but you should at least stop giving us false hope or false promise. no mass release last month event if you finished first and now you push back chapters and when you don't give us the due chapter you give us another reason to try justifying. you have a good story but you should stop all the nonsense and just write when you have time. thanks

Jordypordy
JordypordyLv14Jordypordy

Last 10-12 chapters in 5 sentences 1) everybody knows Erin has yellow eyes (we aLready know) 2) all the captured soldiers are turned, 1-die 3) 2nd leader wants Quinn’s vote. Quinn wanTs to reverse Cia’s memory. quinn finds out fex is missing 4) silver knows fex is missing. leo knows fex is missing (we already know) 5) Fex is captured and Ham is getting him out 6) dun dun dun Kazz is pinned to wall. If you brush aside the noise and bright colours in each chapter you will notice that Most of these chapters lack substance. there is no character development nor is the plot moving forward by much. Everything is Regurgitation Story reader already knows about. 1 chapter he is captured. 3 additional chapters of People realizing he is missing and same cliffhanger. we know fex is missing, silver finds out fex is missing, Quinn finds out Fex is missing, Lee finds out fex is Missing, leo finds out fex is missing, ham knows fex is missing. I understand that the author has his own life but if he takes this ‘gig’ seriously to his readers. just like any oTher job, things come up in life but you still need to work and meet timeline. Getting married, A house, taxes, eye surgery, honeymoon, a baby, a dog, a cat, a car, groceries is not something that is decided in a day. stockpile of material could have been prepared beforehand in preparation for these events. As a paying reader, i can empathize 1 or 2 off’s but with the quality of chapters dropping as well, it is no longer acceptable. it seems like he is trying to move plot as little as possible to milk as much as he can. This js a recurring pattern of cliffhanger after cliffhanger wiTh no movement in plot. He literally went through 3 chapters to leave reader at the same cliffhanger. I will not be paying for privilege anymore until i feel there is a change. readers are being taken advantage of and suckered into being dragged along. Chapter quality has gone downhill and authornis purposely skipping fight scenes to minimize his time commitments. he is regurgitating material (similar to anime fillers) to hit 50-50 goals. I have felt this since early 700 chapters. until he feels Our frustration (from his pockets) I dont see A light from inside the tunnel. This will be 1200 before Quinn fights Arthur or Hilston again. I support ending privilege subscription until theres a change

HanWenqing
HanWenqingLv15HanWenqing

I’m sensing the 2nd family leader pulling the strings with the bloodsuckers and making it look like Bryce

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

More consistency would be a good thing. We do pay a good bit to stay ahead of the curve on this one. Please get some chapters out for us Thannks

John_Canales
John_CanalesLv15John_Canales

this guy goes from getting married to having Lazer eyes surgery .his life is like a novel .

zelosu
zelosuLv15zelosu

I feel like the author should write a novel about his life 😂 Take care, and thanks for the chapter

Steven_Heidloff
Steven_HeidloffLv15Steven_Heidloff

yep, unless I see a mass release before its time to renew im done. I have other books to put my $$$ into.

Gwa55
Gwa55Lv15Gwa55

If bryce did this maybe kaz will turn, if another leader did this then maybe bryce and kaz will turn!

brian_watters
brian_wattersLv14brian_watters

So first off good chapter lots to mull over secondly love your novel BUT getting pretty sick and tired of the excuses, write when you can stop making and breaking promises to fulfill a quota and after this month I'm out for privilege I feel that its not worth the value it once was.

brian_watters
brian_wattersLv14brian_watters

So it is now 23.45 in the UK and no sign of the three chapters from today I will not be voting or buying privilege until things are sorted into a normal schedule again!!!

Brett_Marchinkow
Brett_MarchinkowLv15Brett_Marchinkow

Oki so here are some thoughts, it's going to be long so bear with me. Bryce, when he was very young (before he was able to go to vampire school) witnessed Arthur chopping his uncle's head off (Bryce's uncle was also the family leader at the time). Arthur did this because all the evidence pointed towards bryce's uncle assassinating all of Arthur's people. we as the reader found out though that it was a frame job done by the 10th leader to get Arthur to agree to be a punisher, although Bryce obviously believes his uncle to be innocent. as for the blood suckers they have been talking to atleast 2 leaders possibly 3 or an outside person (Eno) pulling the strings. finally I believe kazz was meant to die, she was compelled by her father to kidnap fex and on her way back to the first castle the blood suckers were sent to kidnap fex and kill kazz as her father knew she wouldn't continue to follow him anymore after he had to compelled her to do something. hopefully this makes kazz change to Quinn's side but also it would be even better if Quinn took out bryce and kazz took over as leader of the first and was friendly/sided with Quinn. all that would be left is for rokene to become leader of his house and fex leader of the 13. so it would be 1, 10, 13, and rokene (forget his house),

JimJoeBobbimbos
JimJoeBobbimbosLv15JimJoeBobbimbos

See now they've hurt Kazz and Fex the whole settlement gotta go, but i can't helpnbut feel the past is repeating and bryce is being set up.

Dalton_Brogdon
Dalton_BrogdonLv15Dalton_Brogdon

Welp now this is really getting interesting if Bryce is the one who took fex then he must’ve tried silencing Kazz as well from this perspective could be a change of faith for her after this or could be someone else pulling the strings

CarelessWhisperer
CarelessWhispererLv14CarelessWhisperer

How does one prepare for eye surgery?

Razor_Sharp_2681
Razor_Sharp_2681Lv14Razor_Sharp_2681

kaszz is going to join Quinn after this

Logan_Garland
Logan_GarlandLv14Logan_Garland

oh no poor Kazz

KJ_jumper
KJ_jumperLv14KJ_jumper

This makes things far more interesting. Good luck with the laser surgery!

Tom_McCurdy
Tom_McCurdyLv15Tom_McCurdy

not first hahaha

terr_t
terr_tLv14terr_t

I’m considering saving my money $$$ and only returning every 30 days or so. This low turn out of Chapters have helped me found 2 other Novels that are great and keeping me entertained. These authors maintain their comittment regardless of success. If you cant maintain, then simply write the ending, take a break and start a new novel some time in the future.

Moltenmark
MoltenmarkLv15Moltenmark

I'm not paying anything for a bit tired of excuses love the story though