Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Hmm...I hope Amy helps to keep Erin's secret. I'm glad Timmy and Xander stepped up to cover sone if the duties carried by Edward. Where is Quinn, there should be a vamp beam (a la Batman) call -or something to that effect- to make him aware of the danger befallen to his fam at the castle. Anyway, the funeral showed thay the tenths are not completely alone thanks to the good relations that Edward kept with the families that came to bid him farewell. They may honor those ties later when Quinn needs them , I hope. Maybe Silver will give Leo some instruction as to the duties of his position since his leader is Fex's blood brother. I had toyed with the idea of the 10ths and 13ths merging with the punishers (I'd like to believe there maybe a few well hidden) into a vamp fam powerhouse, but who knows if that could happen. I love the yarn the author is spinning. Thanks for the chapter!

Good chapter, hope Amy doesn't snitch . quinn will be called back for the vote and that's when he will hear about Edward. he gonna lash over to the first family and balme them for the deaths.

this isn't a cliffhanger chapter it's a consequences chapter, it's a ground work chapter. this is literally going to pull Quinn from the human world. for the new arc of the king's election. if the wrong things happen and I am expecting them to happen Bryce is going to be elected the new king or more interesting someone hidden can also be elected. I figure Bryce wants the job of king, it comes with a lot of perks, who is going to inherit the first family. you know he knows about the lie and the fight loss, Bryce reads like an infovore. I don't see him as the kind to intrust his family to a weakling, his Knight is currently keeping Quinn company and has already indirectly caused him a loss. so the question then becomes does Bryce have greater interest in the power of the king or the continued Ascension of his family.

the cats out, amy knows something is up with erin

Wonder how they are going to gain trust back will be Erin who will prove herself ready to be a vampire Knight, Leo or Quinn showing up. Hoping for a bit of each of them to turn things around.

I wonder if Amy will be able to explain a bit more to Erin about what she is and help her master her powers. I can see some serious problems arising when they have to try and decide who the next Vampire King is going to be, and if Bryce gets the title I have a bad feeling he will abuse his power and make the 10th family's lives miserable until Quinn turns up

Ok I am worried about who will be the new King

This setup though. I worry the culprit behind the attack is one of the 6 who came to the funeral. There are 13 leaders with a vote, and counting Quinn it appears there will be 7 voting for anyone but Bryce. I fear using the bloodsuckers against the 10th is nothing more than a well thought out plan to tarnish Bryce's campaign. Though Bryce not winning is good for Quinn, anyone working with the bloodsuckers is worse for humanity.

Thank you for the chapter! I'm hoping Amy doesn't freak out, and instead helps Erin out.

Ugh, this is not looking good for the remainder of the tenths family Maybe theyll end up taking them and joining Quinn on his mission to be one of the top 3.

Thanks for the chapter JKS ❤

I like the way the characters are developing.

very interesting

so starts the vampire civil war so quinn will be summoned back and hopefully has reached the level of a vampire lord and can have a chance of being king or getting arthur elected as king which would be perfect

Hope Dwight goes to be the vampire knight fir tenth family

Might be the leader with telepathy , it seems too coincidental the coms failed when attempting to request assistance.

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