Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

damn Leo about to f*ck some people up!

i hope they use a leader charm to find the truth and Nicu is punished and made to help the 10th family, i can't shake the feeling that the 1st family is still good.

I know this isn't part of this chapter but I desperately want Quinn to come back when he is super strong... To the point of just arriving in the area makes the entire settlement shiver because they can sense him and how strong he's become. The only thing I can compare it to would be when someone enters a room and everyone goes silent because it's about to go down.

Leo comes in the nick of time! 1rst comment this morning, yahoo!!! thanks for the chapters!!! I ❤️ MVS! 😈

Good to see Leo come in and save the day, but that Nicu did himself in the truth can easily be found out with influence and it would humiliate both him and the first family. The only thing that could be better is Quinn showing up at the school dragging Nicu out and making him confess the truth in front of all the other students. He can even make a big deal about having to put his mission on hold and as well as tell the king two members of the first family were ordered to interfere with his mission in front of the king and have the king use influence to confirm he was telling the truth.

Leo & Arthur have the most entertaining personalities IMO.

Leo is a national treasure and if anything happens to him there will be riots

3 likes for exp please

Kill them both KILL THEM BOTH We ALL want bloodshed

Why is getting exp have to be so hard now?!

Nicu needs to die. Fex got a death sentence reduced to expolsion from the 13th family. Lying to tge council is punishable by death. If Nicu lies to the king...

Oh dear Leo, what just happen? You wanted to test your strength against the gaint 🤺 So i guess game On. 10th family up for some action. He should be able to see the yellow aura and Rowa want to show their strength wiping out the 10th. Curious to see this unfold!!

Woaaaahhhh Leo coming on that rescue. !

Leo comming in for the save

I love a good just desserts story... and Leo delivers it nice and hot!

Leo showing them who's boss, **** them up Leo

Holy shit, Leo's to the rescue I feel for poor Erin getting slapped for not realising what she had done wrong but I hope that this situation doesn't get blown out of proportion. I also hope the Nicu gets his just desserts for try to stir shit up and get Erin in trouble.

Is it odd to be proud of a character in a story? Leo is awesome!

this story is very interesting. I really hate Nicu. Alot of suspense so far.. . what will happen to tenth family in Quinns absence? What about Blade family, will they be join the powerhouse? Am sure cursed will emerge strong too with quin and Sil. another thing am wondering about is Richard Eno who is probably vampires first leader... what is he up-to? He must be planning something to protect humans. Right?