Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

I'm excited to see what happens, Quinn needs more family, vorden Layla and Logan have much to go discover.... Where will w ego first!

Don't raise flags for Vorden dear author. Sil might take over from now on but let Vorden stay in there too.

A sweet moment with Layla and Quinn there, but she is being to optimist her mother may care about her but she is still a leader of pure. I am hoping Quinn will need to rescue would be interesting seeing him take on pure for Layla.

Hmm good chapter

Vorden, stop. Do not jinx it!

Woo first

Quinn little family is leaving so sad

I wonder what is going to happen now that they are all splitting up again and meet the families again.

dude my heart hurt. they been through sooo much and they are leaving quin. its sucks to be with trusted people going thru death experience and have to go separate ways.

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It's exciting you are starting up the werewolf system! I didn't think it would start so soon!

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hey...! only two chapters!!! We want compensation of 4 chapters today.

I'm not liking the "final" part mentioned in the title. Is Sil going to take over permanently or something? I think it would be better if Vorden was turned and it was discovered that Ratan and Sil stayed human. It would keep him as a hidden powerhouse that he has been from the beginning.

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The author made quite a big deal out of Peter's backstory and his parents and sister. I'm gonna be a little disappointed if they're just never brought up again.

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