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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

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Zook_51
Zook_51Lv15Zook_51

if you enjoy writing and can make a living from it, then follow your passion. we all enjoy it.

mikeyeli
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I have a feeling they won't be able to wipe Cia's memories for some reason, charm depends on the weak mind of the victim to work, as much as I hate her, I don't consider her weak.

Andy_lostmarbles
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@JKSMANGA Take your time or a few days if you need to. From reading your work I can see you clearly put alot of thought into what you write and I enjoy your style and pace of your novel. hang in there bud.

Fred_Fred_Burger
Fred_Fred_BurgerLv14Fred_Fred_Burger

Im sorry to hear that work is breaking you... I may be happy that youll have more time to write, but really, Do what is best for your mental health

Marcyint
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Take your time and work things out we can always goa couple days with chapters if its easier for

BeetleB
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I wondering if the travelers will go back given what Leo just sensed. if they do than they are likely going to die...maybe get turned even so the vampire can rebuild his forces. I'm super looking forward to seeing Quinn hit level 20 and evolve to a vampire lord and the changes that might mean. maybe after the tournament at the school? though that is a lot of xp needed. a line from harry potter rings in my ears with this group "why when there is trouble it is always you three" except in this case it's vorden, quinn, layla, peter, and now fex.

Demon321901
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its sad to hear you lost your job but if writing makes you feel happy you can consider becoming an author. If you do i would buy your books no matter the cost (within reason). I look forward to the new chapters.

BeetleB
BeetleBLv15BeetleB

you do what's best for you. we will be here supporting you either way. can't wait to see what you have in store for us. I would think it would be obvious the outing is over and they are heading back to the base. Anxious to see what the address being given will be specifically. Cia being scared is absolutely right after seeing what Fex turned into and everything else she saw.

Fred_Fred_Burger
Fred_Fred_BurgerLv14Fred_Fred_Burger

As for the story, I enjoy it enough to get lost and reread it. I look forward to the next chapter when I wake up every morning, between this and one other series Ive been reading this is the one I can visualize and hear through out my day asking, "What are they going to do next?" :: Im glad he has the ring now, and I hope it doesn't make it too noticable when the kids are outside fighting. hes gone from a solid 5 in everything to being 20s+ soo Just the idea of him getting in the arena as a "level 1" and taking hits unphased, the shadow boxing and the supreme agility, Im starting to see why people are in awe of his improvement in the VR

sildine
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Dont mess of your life too bad but this book i ameizing so keep up the good work

TRpunz00
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lol. just goes to show how you really like writing and hate the new job

lordseven
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title mislead me, I thought he was going to get another blood crystal :D

keith_collier
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once again... happy with the chapter... I believe you have a promising future as a writer.

JungleJerri
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I’m sorry to hear about your work troubles! Your writing is really good, so I’ll keep supporting it. 😊

Clinton_Jordan
Clinton_JordanLv15Clinton_Jordan

a cruel cliffhanger but still so good

FailedSky_Net
FailedSky_NetLv14FailedSky_Net

Author really gets his readers involved and drawn into the story. This is one of my two faves to read on here. Cant wait to see what happens when Cia confronts the group but i am willing to wait for the Author. Great stories take time and a good place to get ideas out. stress and struggle dont help. Good luck

PajamaPhil
PajamaPhilLv14PajamaPhil

I hope everything is ok

Tamyra_Clark
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JKSManga, I hope all is well with you. Your story is amazing but you need employment !

Mike_Scott_0856
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when did Peter get out

Monarch6319
Monarch6319Lv12Monarch6319

don't worry I fell like you will have something good appear in your life may God bless you sould buddy