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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

GABaller
GABallerLv13GABaller

Nope, that's it for me. I'm out. I didn't like peter when you introduced him, I hated him when he turned out to be a spineless coward, and now he's going to be a permanent part of this story. Why couldn't you just let him die?

chaz_mars
chaz_marsLv15chaz_mars

because the others are actually useful and can't be turned right now. and there's also the issue of the whole vampires controlling their spawn thing.

YoungestKing
YoungestKingLv11YoungestKing

Even though Peter sucks its better to keep someone who owes you and you already know sucks than someone who can potentially suck. Work hard.

PopcornSectJunior
PopcornSectJuniorLv6PopcornSectJunior

So............The Cursed Family has been formed and Leo is about to show us how broken he is. Quite a nice chapter to look forward to.

SinfulBan
SinfulBanLv3SinfulBan

$10 says that Leo will do the thing where he slightly unsheathes his sword, appears behind the dalki, and then when he slowly sheathes his sword the dalki gets like 100 cuts

Jason_7672
Jason_7672Lv15Jason_7672

Interested to see how the family thing is going to fully work.

Tented_Wings
Tented_WingsLv15Tented_Wings

It’s nice he didn’t turn into a real vampire but whatever a ghoul is.

DaoistDuck
DaoistDuckLv4DaoistDuck

Congrats on ruining your story author!

CaidenTheKing
CaidenTheKingLv13CaidenTheKing

First the dalki was wasting blood and now Quinn is wasting space by turning Peter into a blooded. How wastefull \_("/)_/

C00l_stry_Br0
C00l_stry_Br0Lv14C00l_stry_Br0

aha! I knew it. I called the day after Quinn evolved and learned he had the ability to turn others. I knew Peter would be the first he'd turn and it would be to save his life, I called it. except I didn't post my shot and now cant back it up if someone says I made this up. [img=faceslap]

Andrew_Seguro
Andrew_SeguroLv3Andrew_Seguro

I can't believe how massive prestige this novel has accumulated!!! And bruuhh my free passes!!

Conciousness
ConciousnessLv4Conciousness

Im done its over dropped this.

Krusher77
Krusher77Lv5Krusher77

More.

Niloysom_Das
Niloysom_DasLv5Niloysom_Das

Good!

casty72
casty72Lv10casty72

thanks

Gl1tchn1nja
Gl1tchn1njaLv14Gl1tchn1nja

I knew something was going to happen to one of them to cause Quinn to turn one of them. While everybody is upset because it's Peter, I think this will give him a good chance to change his ways.

BlazinBean36
BlazinBean36Lv15BlazinBean36

Mstrmarquis
MstrmarquisLv15Mstrmarquis

Keep your friends close, and Enemies closer..

Marco_Diaz_8514
Marco_Diaz_8514Lv3Marco_Diaz_8514

I like how the author shows Quinn let's his humanity still show through and just sees Peter as a person that needs saving and nit the guy that almost got him killed. Author got a lot of readers mad but Iike the this is my story and I'm doing what I want but I'll give a logical reason why approach.

the_1st_ghoul
the_1st_ghoulLv1the_1st_ghoul

this is very addicting more than realized and i see the hype

faimherb
faimherbLv7faimherb

thanks for the chapter