Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

The chapters are still decreasing in content even though the (low) wordcount remains nearly the same... Having next to no contend for such a long time is destroying the fun! If this keeps going I guess I will drop this novel, even though it seems to have great potential. It is plain boring to read these meaningless chapters bit by bit...

I waited up all night to hear peter whine :(, well I hope Quinn reaches them on time with the sun beating down on him

I forgive Peter more going on then you think he’s trying to unravel how his sister died.. take care of his parents but not to mention tortured daily.. blood him you give compassion and strength to protect his family they will be loyal beyond imagination. Y’all say he turned on his friends.. I’ll look you right in the eyes and choke you out if my family was about to die if I didn’t take you out. It’s business nothing personal unless I know for certain you can protect them, some people live for family and not themselves

So developing other characters is great and all, but time and place are important. Right in the middle of a high action event is not the best time. A better structure would have been to have this discussion between Vorden and Peter happen before you did the Layla and Erin running a foul of the Dalki. As you have structured it right now, you've messed up the ******* of your rising action. You got a little bit of dramatic ******* back with the end bit of Layla and Erin arriving back near the Well, but no where near as much as you could have had. I know some Authors on Webnovel use lots of Cliffhangers and endless delays before getting to the real content in order to stretch the ******* out, but if that's what you were going for here... well you didn't stretch it, but rather sawed right through it instead

I always new deep down but it being confirmed scares me. Sil is the origional one...so what happens when vorden isn't needed anymore😢

Your cliff hangers are killing 💔

There is always so many bitchy people that constantly complain about this novel. Save up a few chapters and binge or just stop crying. No one forces you to read it.

Too short, i’ll drop this

Sooooo. I wrote a review for this story about a week ago. Gave it 2 stars saying if you wanna be frustrated then this piece of **** is just for you. Said something about 1chapter a day with only few lines that only takes a minute to read. Then the author replied about me being crazy and dont know what i was saying blah blah blah. Then proceeded by deleting my review. Lols. Good thing I already moved on. Just wanna let everyone know just how low this guy is. Probably why his rating is so high even with this crap. He just deletes bad reviews and keep the 5 stars even if all the content in the reviews are a bunch of gibberish. I mean really? "Acdjdbrgsjaneb" is a review? Or "xp xp xp"? I guess as long as you give him a 5 star rating doesnt really matter if its a bot review or not.

Wow poor Peter.

Ability books don't disappear for anyone but Quinn. If Peter's parents bought one for his sister, Peter could have used it too. They could have studied it at the same time. It's already been established that kids can learn these powers. So Peter could have read the book at the same time as his sister.

thx for chapters, don't listen to this people complaining

love the idea for ice skating through the desert.

what happen? layla: we are screwed Dalki:yea, you are

It's a plane. It's a bird. Its a DALKI!

Interesting book but i like it its diffrent then most

Ahhh, whereeee is Qin

hold up. he said he was made? that's a twist I didn't see coming[img=recommend]

What a good excuse as a traitor. Oh story story. As traitor, anyone have to has many reasons to justify themselves. Lol

Hmm. Not enough chapters. Need more