Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

I just hope that Quinn don't pity Peter and use a slot of familiar on him

Please read. Incase you missed it, yes only four chapters have been released so far. Another two will be out at 0.00 AM GMT + 8 to make the 6 Chapter mass realase. Thank you everyonne for supporting the work.

Is the charm Strictly Physical or can he use it with his words like Hypnosism? Interesting thought whats everyone think?

Can we get to the part where little one kills peter already or Erin or Layla or Quinn in blood thirsty mode like he did Ian

bruh now another reason to hide his powers that shts annoying dam

Don't know about the other or what,. I'm not goody two shoes or what but I really feel sorry for Peter,.. Just think of this being tortured then heal then tortured again,.. i mean they broke his fingers then heal then broke again its a tortured,.. i might loose my mind or even kill my self if that happens. It may not right what he did but guy's just reading it i already feel sorry for him, i don't dare to imagine what he been through,.

Peter I believe, is going to be important

Peter really thinking that they would forgive him is amazing. I mean even after being pushed in the portal Quinn thought about getting earth books for him. People want to feel bad for Peter but come on he is getting what he deserves and the fact that Quinn and Vorden have not told that he pushed them in, so getting kicked out their room is the lesser punishment he deserves.

chapters like this that make me want to drop novels i'm reading

Here's hoping Peter can redeem himself

Once a traitor always a traitor. He should just go die somewhere no1 gives a **** about him. If they forgive him I'm done with this trash Just let him die first chance and move on.

I fee like peter will end up being friends with Quinn again and become a blooded, just like layla ever so soon.

No harem????, no harem!!!

Honestly I feel bad for Peter but he deserves it

why dont he just pretend that the shadow skill is level 1 instead of 6 or smth? i mean,,, he wont have to hide it that way...? no?

I'm hopeful nurse haley will get turned

Will they forgive him, yes. I think

Thanks for the chapter but I want some more action.