Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

*See's longer chapter and proceeds to throw stones at author*

So my guy sucks the living **** out of the girl probably draining half a liter of blood turning her pale, then thinks ‘Let me shove this syringe up her ass and drain more blood’.Is the mc tryna kill the girl or does he have brain damage?

should receive higher stats from virgin blood.

is she going to be a vampire becuase that would suck

Was he really about to steal her blood? It might have killed her no jokes, I mean he does not even know how much blood she lost.

Another one of puss* moment and I'm out.

This chapter is longer so it’s much more appreciated

Owo Author owo.. I was genuinely giving you a constructive criticism but you had to delete my post... I dont believe it! Lol I don't think I would consider you a writer anymore if you don't even care about your readers.

thanks for the chapter

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nice chap👍

how did Peter even know Quinn would be there?

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Layla seems a pretty weak character to become the main lead, and the mc seems very emotional that he becomes brain dead.

I hope you stick to vampire blood stuff don't wanna read about element vampire lol

Quinn is definitely not a hero. He feels more comfortable preying on a defenseless Layla than on an enemy like Rylee

is it bad that I ship Corden with Quinn?

give this novel 1star