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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Daoist_Gogoi
Daoist_GogoiLv4Daoist_Gogoi

Owo Author owo.. I was genuinely giving you a constructive criticism but you had to delete my post... I dont believe it! Lol I don't think I would consider you a writer anymore if you don't even care about your readers.

Daoist_Gogoi
Daoist_GogoiLv4Daoist_Gogoi

This is my last post regarding this novel. I have every right as a reader to criticize n criticism doesn't equals insult kid grow up. If one doesn't even has the guts to take few criticism towards his work den y did he even made it public in the first place. And how can I control wat others views towards this? If anything we readers would voice out the things we see as a slight problem to the author so dat he can improve. Thats all.

DaoistReturner:You are. indirectly insulting someone by critiquing their works. It’s sad but it’s the truth they have the right to delete it if they feel it’s to harsh or they can’t deal with it. You have no right to complain as its highly likely they have learned from you and will work on it in the future and to be frank the author probably didn’t want that critique to be forever in his novel.

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Neotera
NeoteraLv3Neotera

*See's longer chapter and proceeds to throw stones at author*

NoNameNoFace
NoNameNoFaceLv1NoNameNoFace

So my guy sucks the living **** out of the girl probably draining half a liter of blood turning her pale, then thinks ‘Let me shove this syringe up her ass and drain more blood’.Is the mc tryna kill the girl or does he have brain damage?

AshKing
AshKingLv13AshKing

should receive higher stats from virgin blood.

TheInsanekid
TheInsanekidLv14TheInsanekid

is she going to be a vampire becuase that would suck

DragonsRulez
DragonsRulezLv4DragonsRulez

Was he really about to steal her blood? It might have killed her no jokes, I mean he does not even know how much blood she lost.

kekekke
kekekkeLv10kekekke

Another one of puss* moment and I'm out.

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

This chapter is longer so it’s much more appreciated

Harkyrie
HarkyrieLv13Harkyrie

thanks for the chapter

hol_si
hol_siLv4hol_si

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iZ0
iZ0Lv4iZ0

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Skyrieharhar
SkyrieharharLv6Skyrieharhar

exp😁

Reignhar
ReignharLv6Reignhar

nice chap👍

Novel_Addict_98
Novel_Addict_98Lv14Novel_Addict_98

how did Peter even know Quinn would be there?

lulu777_9305
lulu777_9305Lv13lulu777_9305

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HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3HotRedFlaming

Layla seems a pretty weak character to become the main lead, and the mc seems very emotional that he becomes brain dead.

torrelsav1
torrelsav1Lv15torrelsav1

I hope you stick to vampire blood stuff don't wanna read about element vampire lol

Shaunqb
ShaunqbLv4Shaunqb

Quinn is definitely not a hero. He feels more comfortable preying on a defenseless Layla than on an enemy like Rylee

Tridectabrid_Elf
Tridectabrid_ElfLv3Tridectabrid_Elf

is it bad that I ship Corden with Quinn?

BL00DY
BL00DYLv4BL00DY

give this novel 1star