Adui
I think I know now why the chap feel so short it's bc adui tend to use the same word or description he could just explain how the adjudicator look like in the previous chap but his repeating it again in this chap and ofc thats the only thing but it's long to say here but I hope this help for u to improve more. PAWARRRRR!!!!
I love the story and i love how it is progressing. you cant make everyone happy no matter how you try. Keep it up. My two cents ... take a little more time on each piece of the puzzle .... most of us arent goong anywhere . Of course I would like more chapters but do what you can and we can wait. cliff hangers arent bad at all.... maybe not every day but what can you do with only 2 chaps a day?? If they dont like it go back and read 6 chaps at a time.
well whatever they say author for bad or for worse this is a good story.. yeah sometimes the chapter only explains and describe thing until the end but hey there is always the next chapter that explains what is describe in the last chapter then there is the 3rd chapter where we actually see some development and the fourth with the cliffhanger....all in all... i like it coz ur making ur reader hate the chapter but love the next one making them addicted to it and by the way im an addict myself hahahaha
I gotta say... I couldn't care less about this dude and his galaxy, their purpose in the story is to buff our boy... it's not like there's any real romance in this novel, he is at most f*ckbuddies with a couple girls. the only way I could see something like this chapter for us to get to know him to be necessary is if he's the future father in law or something, but we know that isn't going to happen cause... duhhh there isn't a romance tag for this novel