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Comments of chapter undefined of Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

JosephExaure
JosephExaureLv10JosephExaure

I think I know now why the chap feel so short it's bc adui tend to use the same word or description he could just explain how the adjudicator look like in the previous chap but his repeating it again in this chap and ofc thats the only thing but it's long to say here but I hope this help for u to improve more. PAWARRRRR!!!!

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JD_Allen
JD_AllenLv15JD_Allen

I love the story and i love how it is progressing. you cant make everyone happy no matter how you try. Keep it up. My two cents ... take a little more time on each piece of the puzzle .... most of us arent goong anywhere . Of course I would like more chapters but do what you can and we can wait. cliff hangers arent bad at all.... maybe not every day but what can you do with only 2 chaps a day?? If they dont like it go back and read 6 chaps at a time.

Mazino
MazinoLv15Mazino

yea so daddy adjudicator played with a wife out of his league uh what a chad

UnkownMans
UnkownMansLv15UnkownMans

Better than Ultimate?!

Light_wraith
Light_wraithLv14Light_wraith

The pace isn't bad. My frustration is with fluffing your word count with overuse of passive voice and reusing descriptive text 2 to 3 times for each action. The story is great, but the extra, unnecessary description is making us pay twice as much for half the story progression .

Keith_Mwas
Keith_MwasLv11Keith_Mwas

again!!!another chapter with nothing but pointless explanation.if this was put in words to explain the situation it might not even make a sentence.i.e " adjudicator uses the skill .... to summon the aurora galaxy dragon" the end

Dylan_Mead_3593
Dylan_Mead_3593Lv13Dylan_Mead_3593

Cliff hangers are fine and the release rate is fine. The only thing I'm unhappy with (but it's neither my writing nor story) is the constant foreshadowing of higher power levels/items. It seems to happen like every chapter or at least every other chapter.

Patient_Nobody
Patient_NobodyLv15Patient_Nobody

Of all the times I’ve seen this trope, i just want there to be one time, where despite the use of the ability calling for something bad or a persons identity being found out, nothing happens or at the very least nothing major happens as a result of it

Reyvargas13
Reyvargas13Lv15Reyvargas13

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

Olpa
OlpaLv15Olpa

Slaughter tomorrow?

S3ntinel
S3ntinelLv15S3ntinel

The powerful mysterious Mother however i like it

HuskyGorila
HuskyGorilaLv4HuskyGorila

Jesus.... things are getting interesting and it seems like Noah is most likely gain power along these lines!! It’s Noah... we all know he will eventually! Thanks for the wonderful chapter!!

Elinamicheal
ElinamichealLv15Elinamicheal

Ooh my to think that there was a higher and ancient power.

cosmik
cosmikLv15cosmik

Moooorre

kaban
kabanLv14kaban

keep up the good work!

Daoist4XNeZC
Daoist4XNeZCLv15Daoist4XNeZC

well whatever they say author for bad or for worse this is a good story.. yeah sometimes the chapter only explains and describe thing until the end but hey there is always the next chapter that explains what is describe in the last chapter then there is the 3rd chapter where we actually see some development and the fourth with the cliffhanger....all in all... i like it coz ur making ur reader hate the chapter but love the next one making them addicted to it and by the way im an addict myself hahahaha

MDNick
MDNickLv14MDNick

take ur time author-san, no need to rush excellence.

mtrahan
mtrahanLv15mtrahan

4 chapters a day is going to be a pogchamp moment

Witcher101
Witcher101Lv15Witcher101

do you mean next month as in the rest of this month or this month and the next

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

I gotta say... I couldn't care less about this dude and his galaxy, their purpose in the story is to buff our boy... it's not like there's any real romance in this novel, he is at most f*ckbuddies with a couple girls. the only way I could see something like this chapter for us to get to know him to be necessary is if he's the future father in law or something, but we know that isn't going to happen cause... duhhh there isn't a romance tag for this novel