Adui
you know what would i do if i was the writer?????i would reverse their rule,what i mean is that athena is well aware of the fact that her homeplanet was destroyed by celestials and she had a deep hatred for them because of it and she is also aware of the fact that the cirux is fake but she is deliberately playing along with him to use him as tool to destroy celestials
there are many ways to solve this,for example we know she can predict her enemys movements(this is the reason she was chosen as the commander) maybe there is much more to this ability that she has kept to her self,for example the ability to saw through all disguise
kyrillos_gergs:how does she know that Noah is an imposter ???????????????
You should write what you want. No one should influence your decision on how Athena's story will progress. Personally i see her only as a stepping stone and a pawn. But my opinion shouldn't bother you in the least. Your writing is awesome and i have no complaints. Please don't get influenced by others wishes
if u want to jut sacrifice athena i understand as she was the one that destroyed atlantis and it matches with noah's character hating her because she destroyed the world it wont really have any problems, maybe most of the readers just want athena to be part of the harem even though it would be really weird having the one that destroyed his subordinate's world to be part of his harem and if kraken found out even though he cant do anything it might cause distrust among his subordinates even i find it a bit weird on how athena softened up to noah suddenly when he got stronger than her as she was only focused on raising her powers without anything else in mind unless he was affecting her with sin of lust the entire time. it would be nice if athena was in the harem but if she's not then its fine too maybe focus on the 1st girl from his 1st world
I completely agree that you should write Athena's story the way you want. No matter what, I am certain it will be an epic tale. I'm still quite curious about the secret Noah learned about her from that 1 Celestial he killed on the witch planet. There is at least that reveal (amongst others, I am sure) that need to be told before her story is done...
I feel like Athena has 3 real paths (unless I'm missing something). 1) In spite of her feelings for Noah, she stays faithful to the Celestials and ends up dying in the end. 2) Already fell for Noah before Lust was even used, it just made her admit her feelings to him. She is willing to betray the Celestials to be with him. Or 3) She figures out he has been manipulating her feelings and get furious, leading to a scenario where he either defeats her soundly and she goes off to plot revenge or he kills her.
I personally would prefer if he makes her one of his wives... she seems like she's kind of naive and only really thinks about growing stronger, obv I understand those of you complaining about her destroying Atlantis, but keep in mind, she's been brainwashed by the "Righteous" dudes for a long time...