Comments of chapter undefined of E.S. System: Return to the Enchanted Planet

It's good, but a little long for my taste.

i think I need to re-read cause I couldn't understand

again, although i already said it a few times in the chapter. author, you need to fix the miscalculation you made

just regular military training. i mean, you don't find privates going to the battlefield with zero fear. you're really just making it seem like military training is supposed to turn you into a machine

thx i really like how this is starting

It long

I hope nothing bad happens to Elijah. Thanks for the chapter.

Where did this "pain" come from?

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A new reader here, recommended by my friend. Cool story. When can I expect the next chapter?

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It's good... Just started but I'll definitely read more

Thanks