Comments of chapter undefined of Armipotent

This novel has good potential, reminds me of god and devil world. However, it needs some serious editing, I'll keep reading if and when it gets fixed, I can't concentrate on the story like this.

Thanks for the chapter. You sir have a badass mc

Please don’t make the MC being a lackey in the future, that’s not cool. Overall the story is nice, keep up the good work dude 💯

Badass mc but the grammar needs some work but it's pretty good so far.

Nice beginning but your English needs work

He has a good character, sure he’s someone else’s subordinate, but it also shows the MC’s origins story in where he’s loyal, but ruthless to his enemies. Fierce but kind to those whom he protects. He’s also satisfied with the small things in life So it’s really good opening chapter and we, the readers, are able to infer a lot about the main character and the surrounding supporting characters he interacts with.

i was quite hyped after reading the synopsis and all but the grammar killed it man... i know we can make mistakes sometime but atleast respond to the paragraph comments and correct them when the readers find them... dont just ignore it and leave it at that. im dropping it first chapter even tho i really want to read this story,i will come back some time later and i hope you can atleast fix the grammar so new readers dont leave at first chapter like me

No, a zombie in my room is not something that I would ever reasonably expect.

info from 1st chap: MC is strongest thug out there but don't want to be the boss. MC is from Youlolicon. MC is kind to old man.

It's so repetitive it's getting on my nerves. This needs an urgent editing.... 1 year and the author doesn't care for the first chapters

Thanks

I came here because of the d**k upgrade talent in the description

the grammar is painful

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

brah i'm glad it restarted

First ;)

I see for some comments it's already been 3 years. It's kinda disappointing as the premise of the novels sounds nice but the grammar makes me feel like dropping it.... and I only read the first chapter... The author should take some time off to revisit the chapters and edit them....

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

the plot thickens

It feels as if it is a chinese novel translation - the writing quality is bad.