Comments of chapter undefined of All my toys

Thanks for the chapter. Hope he gets them all before the fucking pastor gets to them, he probably already knows that the father and daughter duo are doing something based on what he found. Thanks for the chapter

Absolutely awesome story so far and keep it up! What i think right now since it is still early on you have the perfect opportunity to do so. I think you should consult a more experienced author or a female one at that and then ask for help on the on the for a females (his toys) PoV. You can just stick them in every 5 chaps or so in between the already made chapters, theyre not super necessary but it will help with what youre trying to portray on an even more surreal level. The way you have him observing everything from her body reactions to emotions is already really well done! Love it so far and keep up the good work!

Girls write smut too believe it or not... But yeah kinda would make you look kinda creepy. Anyways seems like you didnt need any outside help and used it as fire to drive the plot which is awesome! 🤗

Awesome build up so far, thanks

Thanks for the chapter!😘💕❤