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Thanks for the chapter! the only nit pick i would have with this chapter is that it would have been better in my opinion if at Timothy's internal monolouge you would have used '...' then "..." as it looks more like him saying that than thinking it Its nothing major i'm just more used with it being like that Other then that great chapter, not much of a compliment as i'm not good with those but i really enjoy reading this novel