Comments of chapter undefined of Second Chance In The Apocalypse
Second Chance In The Apocalypse
shashank_bhatt
Chapter comments51
in case author hasnt thought about how the argument should go for the mall, i suggest that the author uses them to try if the healer can heal zombie bites yet or not, other than that maybe as bait as leaving them alive with their dark personalities is dangerous, only serving to show Cloe and Ethan how the minds of humans have become corrupted without rules, i would appreciate it if the mc also didnt become evil or lustful also, touching the boob of a Hollywood actress was an stupid argument, i would preffer a crazy mc focused on getting as strong as he can to protect his family and friends from the deaths they once suffered, he should be motivated to be strong and with a will of iron, but that attitude makes it seem like he's playing around... that kind of people that don't take stuff seriously shouldn't deserve a second chance, he went to the past to be able to save his girlfriend, friends and family, not to fool around, please follow the example of "Headed by a Snake"(its really well written, characters are alive), a book can be cool and awesome without stupid erotic stuff that are just filler chapters, jokes, carnage, fighting, exploring, discovering mutated animals and plants, weird insects, etc, thats the attractiveness of this book, a harem plot would just destroy it as he would just need too much plot armor to survive. so, so far the book was nice and it has great possibilities, i left suggestion in another comment in this chapters comments also, like the zoos and botanical centers in New York and Brooklyn, and the islands near New York like Governors Island that they can reach swimming or in a small boat. Also he should train hand to hand combat with his girlfriend to ensure she doesn't die on this life, and give her and his friends and family a training regime, he can pick dumbbells from a nearby gym, muscled men and women will survive easier and also with some meditation they could evolve their abilities by tiring themselves training and the consuming the zombie gel and mutant animal meat, he could turn the 9th floor into a training space. Also, the story doesnt have to always be about the mc, it can be in the point of view of others and that way it can also add lots of chapters, like instead of a chapter saying how they go back with the tampons, a chapter from the point of view of his girlfriend training and beeing worried about him and then communicating with the plants and sensing the calling of a powerfull plant (a mutant plant in the Botanical center), a plant that she could end up controlling to kill zombies like he has Teddy she would have this plant, a carnivorous or parasitic plant would be a great choice, mutant fungus also, for example a mutant fungus could control the minds of zombies 🤔.
imagine a mutant elephant from a nearby zoo, that would be really cool, and an awesome mount if he could tame it, they could add a hut on top for traveling, like the ones in "Lord if the rings", the Mûmakil, also they could get lots of of meat from mutated animals from the zoo in central park (a good place to make the sanctuary once cleaned, they can use Belvedere Castle and also have a water reservoir near, they would have to wall the entire park or topple buildings onto the access streets so only random zombies can reach there and no hordes as they wouldn't climb the rubble, they can also fish on the lake, and they could go to the botanical garden on Brooklyn to search for mutated rare plants htt**://maps.app.goo.gl/MgvJ7LAEddAP1ruV6, or New York botanical garden but its a bit far on foot, though the best place for a refugee and its also close by is Governors Island, they can farm in the island and its also armoured with high walls, its not too big but they can remain safe there untill they have enough power to take over Central Park, also they can fish for food and they can see the city from the island, they just need to carry materials to make some fields like seeds and tools, his bear can pull the plow easily htt**://maps.app.goo.gl/Eia1EmupxrmGyq9Q6, theres also Ellis hospital island thats its creepy so they could find a mutated zombie there, and when they get even more powerful they can cut all bridges to Staten Island and clean it slowly with the help of hundreds of recruited and trained survivors, but that would be after Central Park where he can try taming more animals like a polar bear and an african elephant, or a guepard, although the Bronx Zoo would be better for that since its way bigger. htt**://maps.app.goo.gl/zMZJPHuLemq5gv9n8 ).
