Comments of chapter undefined of One More Time: Rebirth

uh.. the last paragraph was too cringe no offense.

Is the black-clad senpai the same person that was sharpening his lump of metal over a mound of bodies in the second book with Leo as the MC.?

I think Rain is gonna have rainy days after his sly intention of being cool. 🤭🤭

Thanks for the chapter! Beat that annoying senpai up hahahaha

upperclassmen does sound good tbh , the structure is nice so is the grammar ,but japanese words are good only for japanese text not for english it makes it weird for english to have onii-chan sensei and other japanese ways of addressing people english words are much suited for your novel it makes it better to read

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Oh ffs, this whole no experience with girls thing is getting old, I don't know what it is with all these beta Japanese MC's but it's annoying, stuttering and turning bright red cuz someone said he was flirting.. if he was an actual 11 year old then fine, but he's not and saying he has no experience with girls in either life isn't a good enough excuse, it's just dumb.