godadi
I wish that this story was more fleshed out and had longer chapters. When the author deliberately leaves things out because they ”just wanna get to the next thing” It makes everything feel so much more shallow In a way. I don’t want this story to become a description of events where some are left out. I want it to describe the surroundings and invoke feelings, as it used to. it’s ok to write longer chapters if you’re in the mood. I’m writing this because I genuinely like your work Goadi, and I want it the become the best it can be. I hope you take this to heart.
I find it funny that TLX learned more from Meng Yue in one conversation than from Mei Lan since she enrolled. No disrespect to Mei Lan but all she does is give TLX tasks that almost drive her to death and always gives her as little info as possible. I am not saying that she is completely bad, it's good that she is forcing her to think but sometimes she overdoes it, especially when it matters the most. And it's annoying that she is forcing a bit too much her students. Beasts don't really care about their growth rate, mostly about their actual battle ability, yet she forces first years to grow a bit too fast.Growth takes time, she knows it and yet she is forcing it a bit too much. I hope she chills out the training a bit since we achieved the main reasons of all this training( silver badge trial and FFF).