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old_goat_199
old_goat_199Lv13old_goat_199

truthfully story As the novel still underdeveloped according to characters perspective Developing the story can makes things more interesting

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DarrenS
DarrenSLv15DarrenS

Story. Be more comical if all these multi-decade old foxes find out her current life's age and power level compared to their own.

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Losh
LoshLv15Losh

Story, I do not think that she is powerful enough to make her way through a complicated romance at the moment. Later on after she has gone through another evolution and knows her own power, that might be the right time to introduce romance. Anyway, thanks for the Chapter, and I have no idea how she is going to get out of this, so looking forward to it!

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Fire_heartWarriors
Fire_heartWarriorsLv5Fire_heartWarriors

Definitely focus more on story because I think it’s best Tang Li Xue gets stronger before she starts getting into any relationships, especially if it’s not gonna be a simple one… I think a little bit of romance here and there would make the plot interesting but a main focus on story is better. It’s also better for the romance to happen naturally. Thanks for the chapter author, looking forward for the next!!!

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AgentBoin
AgentBoinLv15AgentBoin

honestly atory, it's clear there is no real time yet for romance considering TLXs character roght know imho.

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Alex_Johannes
Alex_JohannesLv15Alex_Johannes

also thinking both. I'm slightly more inclined to story... I would rather a romance happen naturally over the course of the story rather than being suddenly the focus and suddenly not.

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TragicHysteria
TragicHysteriaLv15TragicHysteria

I think you need balance both, life doesn't stop when you catch feels and the story can't either. Obviously there will be quiet romantic moments, but in a story like this moments like that should be something the Mc earns and fights for. There are two major conflicts in a story usually, the Mc vs the world and the Mc vs themselves and these conflict should reflect and influence each other. Try to pair an achievement or power increase in the story with a romantic or personal realization, it lends much more emotional weight to the happenings in the story and allows the reader to relate to Mc's achievements in a way through relating to the emotions she's feeling. Basically pair personal emotional growth with power growth to make the moment feel more personal and relatable.

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Wyvers
WyversLv15Wyvers

Focus on the story and slowly add romance into it, just small bits here and there, and slowly ramp it up afterwards

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Skiadrum96
Skiadrum96Lv3Skiadrum96

Thank you for the chapter. I personally would like the story to develop, because I like it and there is so much left. But I think you are right with the romance. While they are all still extremely young for the worlds stamdards, a little cute build up wouldn‘t harm ^^ And one question: How was she able to use her equipment skills again? I thought these things aren‘t allowed? Or did I remember wrong? Because for the same reason, she needs to make new talismans

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Karmarhein
KarmarheinLv3Karmarhein

Maybe story mixed with romance? Something like what you did in that arc where Tang Li Xue reunited with Elder Yang, in which there was a lot of dialogue, mystery, intertwined plots, and things couldn't be solved immediately with fights. That sort of scenario allows to flesh out the characters, and it's a good moment to deepen relationships between them. You're doing a good job with Elder Yang, so I dunno who else you want to work with, maybe Silly Fox? He deserves some love, even if not with Tang Li Xue.

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Zeroncl7
Zeroncl7Lv14Zeroncl7

while I don't hate the romance, I'm definitely loving the story. my preference is story. Romance is something I enjoy while it builds up with the story. Honestly even without romance this story is phenomenal.

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FireBall540
FireBall540Lv15FireBall540

thanks for the chapter

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Yarcazz
YarcazzLv14Yarcazz

story focus, please!

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Nyviria
NyviriaLv15Nyviria

Thank you for the chapter

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Nyviria
NyviriaLv15Nyviria

I would prefer the romance to be a drawn out and occur naturally over the course of the novel

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Hunter_gaming42
Hunter_gaming42Lv15Hunter_gaming42

Thanks for the chapter

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Kelfaein
KelfaeinLv15Kelfaein

both?

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SHIRO_NINJA
SHIRO_NINJALv4SHIRO_NINJA

maybe have the mc regain more of her memories more times so she can remember elder yang quicker. that aside it would be funny when mc finally evolves to everyones normal rank and blows away the competition

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Karmarhein
KarmarheinLv3Karmarhein

Actually, it would be exciting if Silly Fox met, and started a loving relationship with a fox from another continent while getting over his obsession with Tang Li Xue. He's extremely talented, and unique, so it would be a good way to drive the plot, and explore what's up in that other continent.

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Tutil
TutilLv4Tutil

I would prefer story focus romance is cringe