Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Honestly, being able to read their thoughts etc makes the story better. It helps us get a better feel for the character. I like the balance of things and how as the story evolves and they get closer we learn more of their inner workings. Great chapter as always!

I like to hear their thoughts. especially with the misunderstandings... those tend to be funny.

For a minute there, I thought Instructor Mei Lan might recognize Little Loki’s species! I think that Little Loki truly likes Tang Li Xue and won’t betray her!

I think this analysis was much needed.

most definitely. 😻😻😻 It is a much better story that way.

Emotions drive the story, and knowing where those emotions are coming from is essential to developing a character. Loki is actually competing for the spot of most developed/deep character in the series, and he's only been with us for a little while. All of the readers KNOW who Loki is. I would say Tang Li Xue is the most developed, but precisely because she has no emotional drives, when forced to ask who she is, what she's doing, what she wants... what is her character? Nothing comes to mind. The most intimate desires I can remember her expressing were to become a diety and have concubines. tsundere might be her main characteristic. Perhaps incompetent is the other only solid part of her character. Other than that she's been running from arc to arc, doing pretty much whatever the author tells her to. I would love to see her character develop and actually follow based on who she was in the past. The whole not abandoning child/Loki thing because of her own circumstances was fantastic. Could've been written slightly different/better, but it added to her character. Emotions, as long as they are driving the story, are always, always welcomed.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter!!!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter~

It would benefit the characters if one can see how they rationalize in different situations, however, it's best to be careful not to get swept away writing the workings of their mind for every occasion or they will loose all wonder.

I think the story should be speeded up, like training moments slowly get a bit repetitive and I would rather want adventure and action.

This was a cute interaction between all of them

Thanks for the chapter !

Danke für das Kapitel

Mmmmm i wonder why the instructor didnt try and get on Loki’s good side

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