author it feels weird the way you wrote this chapter , it's as if someone else possessed MC body and not his past memories....
tbh I didn't liked this chap, there's is a different from getting your memories back and someone controlling your body đ
yes memories but I hate that there going away already but I also understand but the way he's talking is like he is inhabiting his body and when his memories that person will be gone like he killed him and it's making me feel weird
well... the first part was crap cuz things were everywhere, but I LIKED the second part. Much better written and I can't wait for the next chap.
Author pls get some betas or proofreaders. Yer writing needs refinement!
The dialogue in this chapter is interesting. Im taking a wild guess that Alice, Bastion, and probably Shu are also immortals that came down to the mortal realm with Ryder. Cant wait to see what happens next!
hey I like it but I agree with others as if MC is being possessed or disappeared...I prefer if they both fuse and he has both mentality but primarily the mc as of now before his ruthless side shows up only when they step on his tail or touch his reverse scale.
