Demonic_angel
The beginning was unique and well thought-out. It showed the excitement of the MC, but the rushed small tasks,beginner's village just made it rushed up. It might be better if the story is just moved directly to three year's later ,with the class and guild being vaguely mentioned(which is done,but exclude the extras). In my opinion, Till now my mind is still trying to process what happened till this chapter. The idea is unique. hope the story gets interesting further as it progresses.It's just my opinion and I am not criticizing the story, Please note it.