Comments of chapter undefined of Divinity: Against the Godly System

Is it only me or the story's moving faster than a roller coaster ride?

The prologue of this story really make me snarky and want to lash at every several paragraphs/sentences, tell me i'm not the only one feeling this way

OK who the fck is Xu Liang?

You made a MC with a name like Hades into a friggin brute with no brains! A royal meatshield is still a meatshield man. Gods and Demons will have a troll face on and slap it to death bemoaning why it could not be having a convo with an intelligent fire-hurling aether-destroying mage.

The story is good but it going really fast the author should add a lot more detail and more about whats actually happening

thanks for the chapter

Nice

This chapter feels a bit rushed, I'm not sure if the pace set here is reasonable. I had to read the chapter a few times to understand some parts. But I like how the plot is developing :D

Exp

The numbers don't quiet add up with 25 possible to distribute stat points, 36(6x6) already allocated Stat Points, 19(7+4+5+2+1) Form him distributed points

Really good, i like how you summarized the story to death really short. I will continue reading.

The mc is betrayed and after the fight he is going to be like Kabir Singh....

I hate to say this, but the story is not very well written. The first chapter is a major sporadic explanation of the mc's background which doesn't even seem to relate to anything. There is also almost no context to the storyline. Where is the character interaction? Where is the story buildup? The second chapter makes everything worse. The character goes from level 1 with questionable stats to suddenly a level 170+ Royal Knight!? There wasn't even anything going on in the Novice village! Monsters and adversaries weren't even introduced. Even the dragon had a lack of description. Author, you will need to go back to the drawing board and rewrite this story with some more content in order to keep the readers' interest. Add some interactions and give characters some personality. Describe some of the monsters in the game even. There wasn't even any personal interaction between the mc and this potential waifu he was living with. Even the explanation of how his parents died was very lacking (a truck hit the car they were driving).

Nice

This is already going to be an amazing series. I can already tell

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

This is interesting, I get the feeling we’ll be hearing a lot of explanation till the story truely begins. But I can see the transition happening, this’ll be good.

Exp exp

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betrayal dun dun dun 2