KazzenlX
oh my Alicia!she can't get past the masked man!!🥺she tried her hardest but to no avail! but at least she was able to put Alex back into his senses that he needs to do something or else his wife will be killed.😢 ah sad..I think I got affected by the tasteless comment remark...I can't write properly. Sorry for the comment..it's tasteless and senseless. My enthusiasm to comment is not at its best right now. Apologies darling.
gosh i hate it when Abi is being so stupid and naive....sure sure i get it, she wants to help...but she's too emotional to be able to think rationally... Zeke...I'm not surprised really...his character has always been suspicious...BUT i think for some reason, he's gonna do something unexpected if there are vampires, witches, immortals, and dragons, Abi could have the blood of a fallen angel??? or a demigod??? hahahhaha I'm just guessing really any clues dear author?
Great story but there are a lot of unecessaey words. The chapters could be made shorter by removing these words like “with her own TWO eyes”. The word “two” is unecessary. ThIs is likely the reason why people lose interest. The chapters are made unecessarily longer and it makes it hard to read. i wonder if this is done on purpose aa longer chapters cost more or the writer’s first language is not English. This book is turning out to be unecessarily expensive. Just my two cents. Let’s get this novel finished already. It has dragged on long enough.