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Why are the comments here so toxic and weird? They keep on telling the author to do this and to do that! Not to do this and not to do that! Why did they do this? and not do that? Why don't you guys just read and enjoy the story instead? Also, for goodness sake, this is just chapter 1, do you really have to be that over sensitive and with it?
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I have issues I would like to address. The behavior of the guards and the 'experienced noble' are off. Leo did not show his experience in the chapter. Assuming nobility has an actual value, Leo's household not hireing an experienced hunter is unreasonable. The guards should be giving Leo commands. They are after all here to protect him. There were no major casualties when the group was caught unprepared. If they are so capable, they shouldve held their ground. Assuming Leo was hunting for entertainment, the group shouldn't be far from the outskirts of civilization. Packs of 'highly dangerous' magical beasts cannot exist in such a place. It's one or the other. I'll be turning off my brain while reading this novel until I notice a change in writing