Comments of chapter undefined of A Bored Lich

What are you attempt to achieve with your writing style? We could help you more if we knew what you wanted to accomplish. Give suggestions to help you get to your goal. I think this novel was much more interesting in the beginning. Where D dealt with his mental trauma often giving depth to his non human behavior. Now we are walking the same shuff for the should be hero’s grandkid as the arc is more about his background. The elf dwarf and undead rose boy are way more true characters where doevm and Frey are seeming kinda like extras with issues. I used to ask why you killed everyone off so quickly, but it kind of drove the story and gave reason for the team to continue. I think I understand now.