Comments of chapter undefined of A Bored Lich
A Bored Lich
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Robert_HoldLv14Robert_Hold
Robert_HoldLv14Robert_Hold
take time to flesh out your outline, even if you need to do short sentence flow diagrams of where you want things to go. hopefully that will help.
Random_writer:I'm sorry. I expected two chapters as well. I kept thinking it was me the writer that had a problem, hence the constant feeling of burnout, but now I think it was the content that is the problem. I don't think I like this story segment. I want to end it and get back to Doevm. If that doesn't fix the rate I output content, I don't know what will.
GABallerLv13GABaller
When does this part end? I've basically checked out since Thomas went off on his side quest. I genuinely do not care about any of this stuff. Supporting characters don't *need* to have their own dedicated arcs. Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger never did, and their development never suffered for it. A strong supporting character may not be able to carry their own storyline.