Comments of chapter undefined of A Bored Lich

Like real talk though random, I don’t think any of us mind lol. Also nice to see all these undead types instead of generic undead horde

"Yes and no." Doevm's interactions with the demis really goes to show his character growth over the course of this book. Obviously he's no Saint, but he's at least doing his best for a group of people that has no direct benefit for him. Even all of the information they've given him is something he could have learned on his own in situ if need be. I can tell that your writing style is becoming more and more distinct- characters all have unique voices, background details are made relevant, and nothing feels like it's totally new and unheard of information, just things that we as readers missed. If you are a reader, go back to C1 and reread it. There are so many bits of foreshadowing that I didn't notice until my second go through!

I was wondering why I didn't read it all in like five seconds. (:

through daily passes I get to read your story which feels like I bought it at a book store. there's errors and mistakes but still the best out of all I read on here. or at least one of the few. I hate how I can't get enough but people have lives and we'll I gotta respect that. plus I don't want rushed for the chance of decrease quality

Nice to see thought put into the team dynamic of different kinds of undead instead of the generic “weak zombies in the front and stronger undead in the back” BS

this is simply amuzing. I do not mind stuff like this at all. if necessary, take a break. we as readers won't mind! although I'm saying it really late... hehe. Do what you need.

anyways take my 2 powerstones

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

1 powerstone to you