Tom_Sky
i was expecting a few more chapters, i mean he still isn`t headmaster, minster or has a waifu, i mean 99% of the story was about cleaning up, if you continued the story for a few chapters, it could be interesting in other ways, like interaction with muggles, creating magic potions for squids etc etc. i kinda feel sad that you stopped after having cleaned up voldi and dumble, we dont have a conclusion to his own horxruc, and if all of dumbles are done
this writing style was special, it was interesting I would say. I find the story good, gives a good perspective about the harry potter world about 1 possible way for the story to go. Of course there are some questionable points that we can argue about, but truly it's a Fanfiction at the end, the author did an amazing job writing this, and thanks god he actually finished the book, not too long but good enough for a ride. Author just a question, for my personal satisfaction, who will he end up romantically/politically engaged with? I can maybe imagine Fleur and Hermione, but let me know if you had something in mind. Anyway thanks for the story!! See you on the next one