ruffatorres
This seems like a good story but has too many lose ends leaving me the reader with many questions and wonder. For example, she lost her memory after the attempted murder but somehow remembers the child she lost. She has just met a supposedly new family and before uttering any word to them, she has already given the newborn their last name. Also comprehensive description of the unfolding events would make the story more interesting. an example would be the attempted murder. was she shot or did she just fall, where did she land? is the healing wound on the chest from a gun shot or? who found her? did she drift away in the water. otherwise how did that family save her?