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Comments of chapter undefined of Soprannaturale (Yaoi)

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Soprannaturale (Yaoi)

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PsychoticTL
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I love it, please add the next chapter and I think that you should do what you are doing right now, I personally think how you are doing so far is 10/10!~😇 and please make sure, that he is fucking all the male leads, by chapter 30.😇😎

3yr
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ninaesinko
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I updated the first chapter a little because it seemed to have way too many gramatical issues that I didnt fix the first time around. The second chapter will be out today!

3yr

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Cookie4Life_
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Hmmm, speech is a bit unrealistic, reactions are awkward but this seems like it would be alright. The next chapter would be a turning point though so for now, the author would need to be careful of the details. Try to add some hidden plot points and I recommend introducing the male lead at around chapter 30 as that would get readers riled up but not so far that it would become a slow romance. I think that for now, this would be a 7/10.

4yr
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