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Phantom Of Paris

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MotupLv5Motup

A beautiful chapter! I'm glad he let go of his father's coin. Powerful words..the man he remembered was precious but he may not like the one he might find. A new peaceful beginning with his only family Anita. And I'm glad Maria left...at least for now...LOL!

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I'm glad you think so. It took me a while to figure out how I wanted to phrase it - but I knew in the end Raphael would need to let his Father go.

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MotupLv5Motup

Congratulations for such an amazing peace of work. An intriguing, unique story with lovely, realistic characters. It was a treat to read :)

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