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I couldn’t write this earlier, but for future occasions you might want to consider reducing the time period he spent in the throne of heroes. Logically if he had 6,000 years to train with the strongest and combining the thousands of rituals, ceremonies, and treasures the heroes it wouldn’t make sense for him to be so weak even with no talent. In fact I’m sure there is a ritual somewhere to help with talent or at least increase learning ability. 6,000 years is to long for him to be so weak. It’s a good story though keep it up author.
ok man I love the premise of the novel and I find it very interesting but honestly I've been enjoying it less and less since it began deviating from its original course and becoming more of a high-school drama/suicidal story and its around a character that's not even in the dxd universe , I honestly don't see the point of introducing a whole new foreign cast of character that has no relevance just to deviate and lose focus of the elements that are truly important, the dude is in the dxd world and all he's done for the last chapters is fighting a bully in a world of demoms and gods .