Comments of chapter undefined of improve football coach

dude if you gonna copy paste from mtl, then it will boring. if you adapt this story it will better as it has a premature or rather rushed ending. you can do much better than this, also use the orignal name, else it feels misleading. Orignal name- SOCCER CARD SYSTEM. it takes a span of 6 years, complete grand slam of football honours and 1010 chaps. but system is not extensively used. so if you remove system you can extend the timeline to 10 years which is great .also mc's personal life is ignored, his future plans are ignored due to rushed ending.