Comments of chapter undefined of Death Guns In Another World
Death Guns In Another World
Nickaido
Chapter comments23
billionaire for plot's sake, unnecessarily emotional for plot's sake, annoying partner for plot's sake, etc. sense of being natural is lacking. things are there because the author decided it to be that way. needs to have more depth. flow, background, and behavior should be improved. still bearable but pls i hope there are no forced or unnecessary scenarios in the next chapters i know that this was the beginning and that the story have progressed so much but i still have to drop this comment
honestly the idea of goblin slaying chaoters is good but you made it too long. I only read part 1 and 5 and easily understood it without needing to read the others. you can say that I skipped 3 Chapters and still didn't feel lost or anything. I know that you want to make the story slow going but you're making it feel more boring since you're just adding uncessary chapters to the story
I never really get why protagonists get so angry whenever goblins are killing or raping other humans, if they are not your family member or your friend why do you care, are you not doing the same thing to them by killing them without any remorse just for some money. They are just made like that to torture a little bit more than humans but that's life.
