Comments of chapter undefined of Death Guns In Another World

Good so far,,,just don't take the Arifureta path, and obviously change the MC's trait, don't focus on the bitches, focus on the MC's power development and story deepening,,And don't add those cliche dialogue from the MC because that prove one that he's a douche..... Last but none least,,Good Luck 🤗

I feel like the conversation between Alex and Maria is so out of place. Why did she speak Japanese like she's some kawaii girl. And I hope you don't continue about Alex lust towards her. It just feels like his entire personality trait is just being horny

don't joke with someone if you don't know them not a good Ideal

arifureta vibes but here mc looks a little perverted, a little more useless gifts(going by looks), similar bullies, similar support from a friend and possibly similar looking down by others and similar betrayal in future

If I were you, I would of made the MC dipped his whole team and made him build his own modern army with modern weapons and stuff 😂

this author must be a retard

I wonder.... He has flash fingers right? wouldn't that make him suitable for quick draws or something?

dude sounds like a big simp rn, hope u toughen him up author

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Great novel so far, hoping to see more

I think that Grammar is a little bit of in some cases

Good

Screw the thots, personal growth is best Alex!

I patiently await when the two guns will be unlocked and activated.

I'm getting Should hero/Arifureta vibes from this book I believe it's going to be very interesting💯💯💯

😂😁👍😂😁

noice

Nice~ thx for the chap~

Thx for the chap

wow Author you must like "Clearing an Isekai with the Zero-Believers Goddess – The Weakest Mage among the Classmates" your story is very similar so far lol