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Comments of chapter undefined of Editing Reality (R-18)

Kage_Tane
Kage_TaneLv1Kage_Tane

HOLY GOD, why does he swallow every other sentence. Jesus jiminy Christmas man, get a drink of water or something.

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Lucas_Coimbra
Lucas_CoimbraLv4Lucas_Coimbra

I think this is the first time that I get so angry with a protagonist so fast, it was just 2 chapters. But damn, what an irresponsible retard, it seems that he literally just thinks with his head down, literally ruined the student's life by making her a slut who goes after fucking the teachers for the rest of her life. Even when he "fixed" the error in the next chapter.

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Lustsifer

Lustsifer
Lustsifer
LustsiferAuthorLustsifer

I don't like where is this going...

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

idiot MC is always painful to read.

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

too realistic that overwhelms me, I prefer to read something more basic like an isekai cliche or something similar, anyway the amount of detail in this novel is great, but too much is bad (in my opinion)

Argelicano309
Argelicano309Lv11Argelicano309

I'm curious this story seems to be written by an adult author xd it's the first time I see this type of writing and it seems quite firm xd

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

He should change him self to be the best

moises_vahn
moises_vahnLv12moises_vahn

por imbécil jajaja

FlyingCuttlefish
FlyingCuttlefishLv13FlyingCuttlefish

Nice story build up so far.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story