DAFR
It took 3 days but in the end I managed to read all the chapters of this wonderful Fanfic. A truly exceptional job. I can understand why he got involved in the 1st year events to get the philosopher's stone, but getting involved with the basilisk events I think was stupid. But most importantly, why save his twin? Even this situation with Sirius and Peter, why get involved? Both are adults who have made their own decisions and been manipulated by Dumbledore. Harry has nothing to gain from Sirus and Peter ... well, perhaps from Sirus he can become heir to the riches of the Black house ... I'm sure Grimuald Palace has a wonderful library full of interesting books. But to get them, Sirius would have to die and possibly it would be better if he dies before Harry's 5th year to prevent Dumbledore from getting his hands on the books. very smart of Harry to use his family's wealth to get the best education possible, but how can Jaimes not realize he is losing a lot of money? I don't actually even understand if Jaimes is evil or just thinks his son Harry is the sacrifice he paid to allow Voldy's defeat. If Harry is aiming to improve his body, I believe he should aim for the power of Metamorphomagus, a power that allows you to have a perfect body for the rest of your life. With that power you can also make your muscles, bones and nerves superhuman, thus obtaining a boost in strength, reflexes and speed. I personally believe that the power of Metamorphomagus is the pinnacle of body enhancement. Also, have you ever thought about using this power to help Astoria? Finally, while I can accept that the final pairing is a Harry / Luna, I find it just plain wrong to end up marrying first love, maybe Harry may have experience with other girls before settling down with Luna, or Harry and Luna become friends with benefits. .
I don't understand why add Romance to the story. Harry isn't strong compared to Dumbles and he doesn't even have anyone with enough power to trust. Dumbles is manipulative to the point of seeing his parents' lives easily wasted. It already happened with his friends that in a "mysterious" way they became friends with Markus, and then they left him for misinterpreting Harry. Wouldn't it be easy for Dumbles to use Luna? I like the stories of roamance, including the harem. but the story has already been obscured enough that romance is not necessary unless of course Luna is a sacrifice to make Harry go completely evil.