Lorenzo_Ben
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what hsppened to the chapters?
Sorry for the late reply but I'm revising them! I've noticed alot of flaws and want to correct it all
Where chapter??????
It’s a off putting to have all this info as the first chapter, it would be much easier to somehow explain them through actual plot than getting punched in the face with all this info you don’t understand
When you going to post the first few chapters?
I see a gunner. Is this modern with guns? I would rather there be no guns.
it looks good to me
