Comments of chapter undefined of Love Unfolding
Love Unfolding
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This book is amazing and although I don't really like the ending I still love it Is that confusing it makes sense to me though The story is brilliant, although I'm still a little confused as to why Andy suddenly changed her mind like that. I realllyyy hope your next book continues Donna and Mei's story too ahahha along with hopefully Andy and Ericka getting back tgt but who knows I generally dont comment on books(If I remember correctly) but this one is too brilliant to resist ehehehe Thanks for the story!! All the best in your life and come back soon to write for us!!
I don't know what to say, hmm. that was one helluva ride. i can't say i wasn't upset of the cliffhanger ending but it didn't disappoint. i was kinda worried to see a forced and rushed ending that a possibility of a sequel slipped my mind. I'm totally fine with it ending this way. I've got some theories in mind so I'm looking forward to the 2nd book. Keep up the good work, author-san!
Well, I came to comment again. Now that I read that there will be volume 2, I am more relaxed. About the ending ... My sadistic side particularly liked to see the scene of Erika being rejected by Andy. I also liked the description that the author gave about Erika's internal problems, I just wanted to know about this sudden change that happened with Andy ... In the previous chapter she was practically like melted ice cream. Now she has completely changed leaving her heart and her reaction to seeing Erika totally cold. That reminded me of a phrase in my country that rhymes, but in English it may not make sense, but it basically sums up what Andy feels now: "Antigamente sofria, agora sou fria" (I used to suffer, now I'm cold) It doesn't rhyme much in English but that would be the translation 🤣🤣🤣
I know im severely late but, its a struggle being a free reader xd. This book is amazing, its brought me to the brink of tears on many occasions, and i adored every second of it. And now that I've finished, Ima go cry and patiently wait for the next book. Thank you so much for writing such a gripping story Author! I hope to read more from you soon!
I think my biggest question around all of this is why did Andy keep her family a secret from Erika? I feel like it would’ve given Erika some confidence. Not just that she would be financially secure, but that a big well known companies daughter has come out as gay. Also, the fact that Andy knows Mei’s grandparents and that they know she’s gay. That wouldve offered her a baseline of support within the family....I don’t know, it just seems odd that Andy is keeping all of this from her.
Perhaps this isn't the right time yet for Andy and Erika. Their characters are really great but they still have a lot of growing up to do. And Louchyy, you're one brave author for throwing this cliffhanger. The story has a sad ending but at the same time, very realistic. Everything doesn't always end with rainbows and butterflies. In fact, it's almost often the total opposite. People break up and people drift apart, may they be friends or lovers. Author, you have my salutes for ending this story like you did. Bravo ❤️👏👏👏 ps. see you in the chats, we need to talk (😐) hahahha
