Suryaboddu
?đ The MC died to avenge a woman. In life she was exceedingly important to him and her death was horribly tragic. Although he seems to have killed those responsible, I can only see his deep regret for having implicated her. I had hoped to see some cosmic justice in the form of a reward to the MC and the revival of his cherished sister(?). Instead the MC is thrown into his next life on the border of life and death. His former good deeds hold no barring on his future and his âsisterâ seems to have become a fading memory. His soul, captured by that pretentious beingâthat peeping voyeur never once mentioning the girl... Sam was so complacent while dying for his deeds yet now he quietly follows the whims of that godly being not even questioning itâs purpose? I understand he is granted a new life, but what becomes of him if he refused? Would he be reincarnated elsewhere or simply be turned into cosmic dust? What of the girl? Now the MC is destined to carry his regret, a potential heart demon, into this new world.
that's what makes the MC. he doesnt have clean slate. as for the god, did he give Sam a choice? he just forced him in. and following the god's wishes. there is no benefit in defying that god except for some feeling of satisfaction. Sam is too small to change anything. So the n3xt best choice is simple. if you cannot change the rules of a game. just follow the rules reach the top and change it as you want. Sam is doing that now and it cannot be expressed in a small number of chapters
Hey author, this is just a suggestion but I think you should think about fixing at least the first few chapters... many peple will decide if the novel is worth it after reading a few chapters (I suppose the number of chapters depend on the individual) so fixing the grammar of these chapters may lead to more readers (I think so at least) (**: if I butchered the grammar well, I'm not a writer so it doesn't matter :-|)
No one cares how many languages all that matters is that u are using one to write and the grammar was bad don't defend it ...by the way we only got 2 chapters you can't spoil a novel worse than this.. ..even indian southern movie mc's are not this overpowered.. . A spirit body noticing his potential They freaking created him